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you really should work on having longer posts. they're pretty short and i didn't see alot of facts in there.
you also should work on putting more voice into your writing. 'Cause to tell ya the truth, i heard no voice at all.
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ReplyDeleteyou really should work on having longer posts. they're pretty short and i didn't see alot of facts in there.
ReplyDeleteyou also should work on putting more voice into your writing. 'Cause to tell ya the truth, i heard no voice at all.
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